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Jinx squeezing Stafire

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Commission from :iconlafrk:
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:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

No shading, lazily done, starfires head is all wrong. I have really nothing to say about this piece, it speaks for itself. The left cheek is much flatter than the right and starfires left foot looks messy and was most likely done in a rush. I don't see you improving anytime soon as the proportions are all wrong. One way you CAN improve slightly is if you test shading. But until then, I don't see this 'art' having any impact on deviantart for a definite while. Really, you need to focus on hands, feet and proportions. I think this was the fairest I could have been.